Tuesday, October 26, 2010

FIRST DRAFT

GLOBALIZATION

                   You must be wondering what globalization means!!!!  Globalization means that the whole world becomes a small village where everyone can know what is happening in any part of the world. Also it means that there are industrial, economical, educational and cultural freedoms between the countries of the world. This phenomenon has appeared lately because of the technology of nowadays.

                    I disagree with the existence of globalization. It's another term of imperialism and colonialism. The developed countries changed the term to fool the others with its good intensions. They only want to take all the sources of money and to make them still undeveloped counties by giving them all their needs without giving them the chance to think how to get them by themselves. This brings out the idea of colonialism. But in the past they used to take the land by war in order to take the spoils of it. Now they take all good stuffs of the country under the name of friendship and cooperation.



                   On the other hand others agree with the idea of globalization. They proved their point of view saying that it's useful for the progress of their countries. As it provides them with all the means of comfortable and amusement such as satellites , internet, modern sells phones and high tech machines. We can't blame them for that but they must be aware of the results. The developed    countries are working so hard to remove the existing culture in the country with their own culture. They also force the people to talk their own language in order to interact with them.

                     Finally, the one can't say more about it as it's painful seeing your country is falling back and the others are moving forwards. We should stand as one hand against this monster and say NO FOR GLOBILIZATION. We should make people aware of that history repeats itself and globalization is another meaning of colonialism.

4 comments:

  1. A good draft.
    Read three of your friends' drafts and send comments to the.

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  2. you choose a good topic . your introduction is attractive and it has a main idea which is clear and also your conclusion.

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  3. well done Mona ,your draft is really fantastic one .your introduction is attractive and your counter opinion is very organized.

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  4. Your essay is very attractive. you have a good chosen.
    Your essay is well organized. Your introduction is very interesting and has clear purpose. in the body, the sentences are clear and direct. your topic sentences are concise. your words are clear and easy for understanding. you introduced great opinions. your conclusion is very amazing.

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